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Mountain Brook

Fresh flowing water, Reciting melodic stream; Poetic trickles.

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Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 6/6/2009 6:00:00 AM

Raul...reading you again. What an intimate understanding you have of nature! It seems like you are almost a tree or a flower yourself..and understand them completely. You write with such power...I am amazed by you. Patricia Langston-Moran

James Fraser

Date: 5/31/2009 12:40:00 PM

Another gem from Rauls pen>James

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/31/2009 10:58:00 AM

Just a perfect Haiku!! Lovely ! Laura :0)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 1:38:00 AM

i love the poetic fragrance in this Haiku---it brings me serenity in my heart-charma

David Smalling

Date: 5/30/2009 11:46:00 PM

The ending is how I feel sometimes ... channel is to narrow for the gushing flow ... thanks for being you when you comment on my poem. Love.

Jessica K

Date: 5/30/2009 8:30:00 PM

Quite remarkable, I love it -Jessica

Justin Hensley

Date: 5/30/2009 6:41:00 PM

Very beauitful poem love the last line that just made it woderful!

Michael Torres

Date: 5/30/2009 5:51:00 PM

Raul my computer was down Im purchasing a new one. Sorry for not responding fast enough.GBU Beautiful poem

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/30/2009 3:42:00 PM

It's sound is refreshing and delightful. Music to my eyes : ) Love, Shar

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2009 3:30:00 PM

I like your Haiku. The mountain must be great. Sara

Donna Golden

Date: 5/30/2009 2:25:00 PM

Cool and refreshing, Raul! I'd love to jump in! Happy Saturday! Donna

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2009 2:08:00 PM

The sound of water is a great inspiration for poets. You have captured it in your "Poetic trickles." Excellent haiku, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/30/2009 1:54:00 PM

Reciting melodic stream...totally wicked line...brilliant write.