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Mountain Brook

Fresh flowing water,
Reciting melodic stream;
Poetic trickles.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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Patricia Langston-Moran

June 6, 2009 at 6:00 AM

Raul...reading you again. What an intimate understanding you have of nature! It seems like you are almost a tree or a flower yourself..and understand them completely. You write with such power...I am amazed by you. Patricia Langston-Moran

May 31, 2009 at 12:40 PM

Another gem from Rauls pen>James

May 31, 2009 at 10:58 AM

Just a perfect Haiku!! Lovely ! Laura :0)

Charmaine Chircop

May 31, 2009 at 1:38 AM

i love the poetic fragrance in this Haiku---it brings me serenity in my heart-charma

May 30, 2009 at 11:46 PM

The ending is how I feel sometimes ... channel is to narrow for the gushing flow ... thanks for being you when you comment on my poem. Love.

May 30, 2009 at 8:30 PM

Quite remarkable, I love it -Jessica

May 30, 2009 at 6:41 PM

Very beauitful poem love the last line that just made it woderful!

May 30, 2009 at 5:51 PM

Raul my computer was down Im purchasing a new one. Sorry for not responding fast enough.GBU Beautiful poem

May 30, 2009 at 3:42 PM

It's sound is refreshing and delightful. Music to my eyes : ) Love, Shar

May 30, 2009 at 3:30 PM

I like your Haiku. The mountain must be great. Sara

May 30, 2009 at 2:25 PM

Cool and refreshing, Raul! I'd love to jump in! Happy Saturday! Donna

Carolyn Devonshire

May 30, 2009 at 2:08 PM

The sound of water is a great inspiration for poets. You have captured it in your "Poetic trickles." Excellent haiku, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

May 30, 2009 at 1:54 PM

Reciting melodic stream...totally wicked line...brilliant write.

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