Mountain Battle Scars

war rages upon buttes nature's elements lash out against lofty peaks frigid winds and rain slowly carve out gaping wounds indiscernibly deeply scarred faces erosive testimony of battered bodies Tanya Harrington © 07-03-2012 For Mountain Haiku Contest
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Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 6:03 AM
congrats Tanya on a lovely win for a beautiful mountain view luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 12:52 AM
YOur set was one of the most profound. Congrats in the contest.
Owens Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Congrats on your win in the Mountain contest...Marty
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Tanya. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 7:22 AM
Tanya congrats on your win...superb..David
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July 12, 2012 at 4:22 AM
Congrats on your win Tanya
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July 11, 2012 at 7:53 PM
Tanya, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD
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July 4, 2012 at 12:56 AM
Very nice haiku series here Tanya.Enjoyed the read.
Pettit Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 9:41 PM
Your mountains have a kind of mortal human quality in these haiku entries.
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 8:50 PM
wow, likening this to past battles. I know they are natural ones but that last haiku seems to be speaking of human ones! this is really great, Tanya!
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July 5, 2012 at 2:56 PM
Thank you Andrea
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July 3, 2012 at 2:55 PM
This is superb Tanya! I really enjoyed this expressive write! Great Work!!
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