Mountain and Sea - Spenserian Sonnet

Mountains are immovable, defeating
Except when worn by a mustard seed faith.
Your love for me is transient, fleeting
Gone so quickly, it is more like a wraith.
You have too much love, like Henry the Eighth;
There's ennui in your arms; death in your gaze.
And she may be new, but you can't have baith.
I believe this is only a phase.
Then, you stroke her hair; wake me from this daze.
You are not a mountain, you are the sea,
Ocean waves that drown in a nightmare haze.
You could not be worn; you're water eroded me.
And though you killed me, I crawled from my grave
Saw you're a rip tide; you don't love, you lave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations in the contest of Dr. Ram Mehta "The Spenserian Sonnet" Kristen. A well deserved winner. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 9:54 PM
Kudos kristen for big win in Dr Ram's Spenserian contest with this creative piece. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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March 15, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Liked the analogy to Henry the Eighth, Kristen and that last line is awesome: "You don't love, you lave." Brilliant sonnet. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
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March 15, 2011 at 8:54 AM
It's great to see you in the top ten Kristen. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored Ninth place. Agape, Moses
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March 15, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Congrats Kristen on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's Sonnet contest luv with these elegant lines of entry ...enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in my contest, kristen
Mehta Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 6:40 PM
Your entry to my contest have been multiplied sixteen times. I don't know how that has happened. Will you please check your entry. kristen
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