Mountain

Mountain

I don’t know whether I’m on top or in the valley
If only I holt still my current position

I don’t know if I should climb or ramp 
If I climb, if I met snakes in the greenery

If the grey man on it is a survived pray
If the buds pointing at me are blackberries

The least I must do is taking the risk
The least I must do is fixing my wrist

What if I slide back till the floor
I must appreciate the opening of a new door

I must try
I can beat this cry

Now I’m on the top
A sign perseverance and hope

©John Kazadi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/22/2020 12:49:00 PM
Hello John Kazadi, I like this poem you created. Glad to hear that you are on top. Be safe. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/22/2020 5:15:00 PM
Hello John Kazadi, you are welcomed. Be safe. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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John Kazadi
Date: 4/22/2020 4:51:00 PM
Hello Darlene thanks a lot my friend for the love you keep showing for my poetry. have a blessed day my friend
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