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Mountain


Majestic cloud
 hovers over
  snow topped mountain-

   thick darkness
          lurks below

snowfree verse

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Kai Michael Neumann

June 10, 2019 at 1:18 AM

Great image, Kai

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

June 10, 2019 at 7:06 AM

Thank you Kai

Eve Roper

June 9, 2019 at 8:36 PM

so very true, enjoyed reading

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

June 10, 2019 at 7:06 AM

Thank you Eve

Vijay Pandit

June 9, 2019 at 8:41 AM

I see that view in your words..excellent imagery, Allen.

Connie Marcum Wong

June 8, 2019 at 8:36 PM

This can be read metaphorically and it makes it even more enigmatic. I love it Allen! : ) xxoo

Harry Horsman

June 8, 2019 at 4:12 PM

brilliant visual poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

June 8, 2019 at 9:54 AM

Love the contrast!

Kim Rodrigues

June 7, 2019 at 11:02 PM

I can picture this! Nicely done!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

June 8, 2019 at 12:59 AM

Thank you Kim

Heidi Sands

June 7, 2019 at 1:01 PM

Very nice. I love the mountains. You have shown a nice scene with this poem :)

William Kelii Kekaula

June 7, 2019 at 1:00 PM

I saw that visiting Washington state and took a picture, I'd like to share but I do not know how--it was but Mount Rainier outside Seattle--very beautiful hoverance allen, Aloha William

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

June 7, 2019 at 1:43 PM

William. I would like to see that. Only if convenient for you. My smart phone is 609 879 1408. I have been photography for about 23 yrs by the way. Best, Allen