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Mountain

Majestic cloud hovers over snow topped mountain- thick darkness lurks below

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/10/2019 1:18:00 AM

Great image, Kai

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/10/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Kai

Eve Roper

Date: 6/9/2019 8:36:00 PM

so very true, enjoyed reading

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/10/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Eve

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/9/2019 8:41:00 AM

I see that view in your words..excellent imagery, Allen.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/8/2019 8:36:00 PM

This can be read metaphorically and it makes it even more enigmatic. I love it Allen! : ) xxoo

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/8/2019 4:12:00 PM

brilliant visual poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2019 9:54:00 AM

Love the contrast!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2019 11:02:00 PM

I can picture this! Nicely done!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/8/2019 12:59:00 AM

Thank you Kim

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2019 1:01:00 PM

Very nice. I love the mountains. You have shown a nice scene with this poem :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/7/2019 1:00:00 PM

I saw that visiting Washington state and took a picture, I'd like to share but I do not know how--it was but Mount Rainier outside Seattle--very beautiful hoverance allen, Aloha William

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/7/2019 1:43:00 PM

William. I would like to see that. Only if convenient for you. My smart phone is 609 879 1408. I have been photography for about 23 yrs by the way. Best, Allen

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2019 11:59:00 AM

Very descriptive, fabulous imagery Allen:-) hugs Jan xx

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 6/7/2019 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Jan