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                            July 13, 2026, entered in Tania Kitchin's Summer Limerick contest        NA

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Mounds on the Beach



At the beach half-clad girls pranced around.
Husbands ogled. Their irate wives frowned.
     When the guys fell asleep,
     they got buried neck-deep
in the sand. Wives then couldn’t be found!
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Crandall Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 8:22 AM
Haha, so those mounds you sometimes see on the beach are really errant husbands - lol.
Canerdy Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 8:24 AM
Yes, that's my understanding of the situation! LOL! Thanks, David. Janice
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