Motivation

He read till his face turned red,
while i wore blue, singing blues
while he read.
For a presentation before scholars
in purple robes awaits.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:30 PM
LEGENDARY LEGEND, nice. lINDA
Shahein Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Very nice and beautiful write my dear, enjoyed reading every line, hugs / / :) dalia
Fisher Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Nice use of colors in your poem...this is a piece of art.
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Very nice pen Legendary Legend! Well written! A 7! Wishing you a lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:) D.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 8:33 AM
I know the feeling so I can read between the lines. What an Imagism, dear L.L.!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 3:58 AM
A clever choice of words that are simpatico with your message. I enjoyed this Legendary.
Legend Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 8:18 AM
am glad you did...tanks fir stoooing by.
Sage Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 4:32 PM
well written word...nice write there Legend
Legend Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 8:17 AM
tanks alot sage....Hugs
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