Motivating Moses

When Moses parted the waters
The mud squished up to his garters
So a crocodile said,
"If you'd rather be dead
Then guess where I'll chomp for starters!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Hello Rico … the salties up north don't have a preference what they might eat first so I can't give an answer Rico - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Aye, the majority are happy to sink their teeth into anything that moves! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Giggles ;), xomo!
Leffanta Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Happy to keep you laughing! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 5:59 PM
ha! you are too funny, rico!
Leffanta Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Just noticed you have been entertaining Soupers since 2012! You have certainly left a legacy to your grandchildren. Congratulations! Aloha! Rico
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