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Motionless Motion.....

At the outer edge furthest fringe
inertia's massive bellows binge
hot and cold determine extremity
within it's hold examine brevity

Motionless motion eye of the storm
inert 'till built it's structured form
waiting enmasse desired effect
above and below mirrored reflect

Attitude and consciousness similar
facing the storm of the unfamiliar
staying centered focused peace
a different form of energy released......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/10/2008 3:23:00 PM
I'm thinking of Uri Geller moving spoons ... smile ... beautiful rhythm to this and awesome lines: "motionless motion eye of the storm" fills my head with pictures of Katrina ... your writing is like watching movies ... smile
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