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Motionless But Still

All my restraints repealed., just because her alec eyes.. I just lipped her lips, passionately and against all lies. She Stood., motionless but still.., or without any skill, may be her modesty, or in absence of some thrill. My eyes get closed.., and I felt an unknown glue between mine and her's, The moment , which I waited a long.. silently whispers. When I opened my sight., All my sentiments ., shed away in a single go., It was her daguerreotype.... Mery was married to John., some.. eight decades ago.

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Date: 5/28/2018 8:38:00 AM
Amazing poem...wowza!
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Date: 7/20/2017 1:48:00 AM
Very skillfully written poem, Shagun. Congrats on you win.
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Ra Shagun
Date: 7/20/2017 1:54:00 AM
Thank you Mr.Afzal....Glad you like it :)
Date: 7/18/2017 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Shagun.
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Ra Shagun
Date: 7/19/2017 3:53:00 AM
Thanks Subimal ..And congratulations to you too.
Date: 7/18/2017 12:08:00 PM
A poem like a story to reveal. Congrats!
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Ra Shagun
Date: 7/19/2017 3:54:00 AM
Thank you Kim .. Congrats for your win .
Date: 7/18/2017 9:44:00 AM
This leaves one reading between the lines....there was more to the story, of a lost love, perhaps? Intriguing poem this is.....well done, Shagun !
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Date: 7/18/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Carrie.,And a big congrats to you.

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