Ra Shagun Poet Free verse

Motionless But Still

All my restraints repealed.,
just because her alec eyes..
I just lipped her lips,
passionately and 
against all lies.

She Stood.,
motionless but still..,
or without any skill, 
may be her modesty,
or in absence of some thrill.
My eyes get closed..,
and I felt an unknown 
glue between mine and her's,
The moment , which 
I waited a long..
silently whispers.

When I opened my sight.,
All my sentiments .,
shed away in a single go.,
It was her daguerreotype....
Mery was married to John.,
some..
eight decades ago.

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David William Breidenthal May 28, 2018 at 8:38 AM Amazing poem...wowza!

Afzal Nusker July 20, 2017 at 1:48 AM Very skillfully written poem, Shagun. Congrats on you win. Ra Shagun July 20, 2017 at 1:54 AM Thank you Mr.Afzal....Glad you like it :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy July 18, 2017 at 11:28 PM Congratulations, Shagun. Ra Shagun July 19, 2017 at 3:53 AM Thanks Subimal ..And congratulations to you too.

Kim Rodrigues July 18, 2017 at 12:08 PM A poem like a story to reveal. Congrats! Ra Shagun July 19, 2017 at 3:54 AM Thank you Kim .. Congrats for your win .

Carrie Richards July 18, 2017 at 9:44 AM This leaves one reading between the lines....there was more to the story, of a lost love, perhaps? Intriguing poem this is.....well done, Shagun ! Ra Shagun July 18, 2017 at 3:49 PM Thank you Carrie.,And a big congrats to you.