Motifs a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

MOTIFS
overlaid
&tangible
in  conscious
manifestation

a
significant
  vitality
so abundant
in
bizarre
 variety

 silent
gestures
  refined
&appended
seemingly
infinite allusions
 suspended
features
resembling
the
ostentatious
in exaggeration
of
 transformed
similarity

contemporary
 notions
overshadowed
with
flirtatious
  motivations
of
extravagant
  luxury
in
symbolic interpretation

indications
  stretched out
in
ceremony
of festive emblems
 assuminging
a
normative a
emphasis
&imitating
 illuminating
with an
 intensive & coherent
brightness
expressed
by contemplation
of
the
  oddly ambiguous

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