Mother's Womb

in her waiting room we wait in amniotic air we incubate and emerge with a surge in a birthful purge one month after eight
(April 9 2016)
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Murray Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 1:20 AM
Wow!! As a midwife I can relate. I give this an eight!!
Delaney Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:10 PM
The way you write 9 months is quite unique. Nice tinkering , SuZ
Tudor Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 6:49 PM
It was the only way I could make it work! Thank you Suzanne. J.
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 2:06 PM
very creative J tudor really enjoyed:-)hugs Jan xx
Tudor Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Thank you very much Jan, I'm pleased you found enjoyment. :) J.
Scars Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 11:56 AM
wow, this is very clever and creative J, well written :)-luloo
Tudor Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Laura...procreation is the most cleverest thing of all! :) J.
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