Mother's Moody Blues

"I shall be telling this with a sigh" 
                              Robert Frost

Mother's Moody Blues

When she’s tired, she’s moody,
Can be dangerous as well.
Gives looks enough to kill us,
Yes, she really gives us hell.

She shouts and says she works hard,
Then cleans house, and has to cook.
Says, none of us would give a damn,
If we lived in our lives in muck.

She also goes to work now,
Needs to subsidise our way.
Since I got made redundant,
And now get lower pay.

She trundles through the kitchen,
And stamps her way up stairs.
She shouts and moans and groans a lot,
Says, no one really cares.

We sit here saying nothing
It’s safer much that way.
’Cause if we dare to say a word
She’d really make us pay.

She’ll get up in the morning.
To start another day.
But then because she’s rested,
She’ll be happy, nice and gay.

She really is a lovely mum,
A wife and grandma too.
And if we ever lost her,
We would not know what to do.

Its only when she’s tired,
That we're careful what we say,
And even then we love her lots,
But... stay out of her way!

                          Ivor G Davies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Any Mother Poem" contest Ivor. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
October 25, 2011 at 2:58 PM
Congrats, Ivor. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 11:37 PM
She is like many other mothers and just as deserving of a tribute. Congrats on your win, Ivor.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Congrats Ivor on a wonderful win with this tremendous write luv...
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Mama's are human too and life can be tough for them. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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October 21, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Entertaining write, Ivor. Thanks for dropping by my site earlier today. Robert.
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October 21, 2011 at 10:29 AM
excellent work love the robert frost line that inspired it p.d.
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