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Mother's Empty Room

Small room with one door Pale green carpet lines the floor Two windows, shades and curtains Pink roses scattered uncertain Paneled walls remember Our Moms love this December Figurines rest on dresser tops Some gifts, others from local shops Flower petals that hold no scent Potpourri in baskets, its fragrance spent Jewelry in boxes free from dust Treasures left to us in trust As we walk in her room Memories flood, it’s too soon Our hearts rhythm the song Her being gone seems so wrong As memories waltz in our veins Longing for her voice, still, in vain Pictures now our fingers trace With each touch, her remembered grace Eyes, once blind, can now see Pain and sorrow gone, her soul set free Her voice, now strong, rings in heaven above Carried through the air on wings of the doves To all this and more, we longingly cling How we’d love once more, to hear Momma sing By: Debra Squyres 12-3-2010 NOTE: Though I searched in vain for the first draft of this first poem I was unable to find it. It was much longer and filled with cliches.... This is the poem I spoke of in my "Poetry on My Poetry" poem. Of course it is cleaned up a good bit now and I've actually changed the title to "Room of Memories"

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Date: 2/1/2013 9:33:00 PM
This beautiful Deb. Room of Memories sounds good. I too remember my mother's room. She lived with my brothers, on and off with one, or the other. Her room was always kepted very neat. But in 2011 she was in the hospital and they started taking the room apart and getting rid of her things. I didn't think it was right, because she was still alive. She passed away in last year. Lucilla
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Date: 1/30/2013 9:20:00 AM
Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.
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Date: 1/17/2013 3:22:00 PM
This is what a person see's when they look at memories ;} nice job Deb!
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Date: 1/17/2013 12:30:00 PM
Words create pictures ... pictures create memories. A beautifully written picture, Deb ... :)
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Date: 1/14/2013 4:37:00 PM
This is devine Debra. Your true talent is showing through very vividly these days. May your Mom's warmth be with you always. :)
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Date: 1/14/2013 4:25:00 PM
Heart touching words and memories!
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Date: 1/14/2013 9:18:00 AM
I loved this poe, really touched my feelings Debra, i had 2 beloved person which also gone and through this i recalled my moment.. :) - hug, yanny
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Date: 1/13/2013 8:30:00 PM
Hi, when someone comments on my poem, i always read a few of theirs... This one escalates in sadness with each word... ...I like it alot, it rises as a its reader sinks...
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Date: 1/13/2013 5:56:00 PM
This is truly beautiful Debra and a lovely remembrance of your mother. Her things and her room are full of memories. Thank you for your comments on my oferings. Love, joyce
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Date: 1/13/2013 3:46:00 PM
Wow, this is a truly beautiful and gorgeous write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing and outstanding poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, a harmonious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/13/2013 3:31:00 PM
Hi Deb, it's about my grandfather he was a wonderful man to me I absolutely loved him then he had a sudden heart attack and all was gone at a very young age, but I shall never forget him, your poem made me post it, thank you...David
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Date: 1/13/2013 3:27:00 PM
lovely write, Debra - pity you lost the first draft, but this is a wonderful write
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/13/2013 3:52:00 PM
It may still be on my old computer...at least I hope !!
Date: 1/13/2013 2:39:00 PM
What a lovely poem of remembrance.
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Date: 1/13/2013 1:22:00 PM
Debra wonderful memories here...David
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/13/2013 1:25:00 PM
I wrote this to remember the room...before we cleaned it out, per Dad's request. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 1/13/2013 1:10:00 PM
A stunningly beautiful poem Debra ...... brings tears to my eyes to read it. - I lost my mom for 1 1/2 years ago She was only 75 years, miss her a lot. - Have a nice new week. - And thank you for writing this poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/13/2013 1:26:00 PM
We lost her in 2010, Her mom in 2011, My Dad and Father in law in 2013... and several others in 2012. Thank you for your comment and kind words. Blessings to you. I don't think we ever stop missing them....sighhh

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