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Mother's Day's Daze

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            ‘pon mine lips
                warmth
            past mine lips
                   life

          mother’s breast
              mine force

flowerfor hercarpe diem

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Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2015 at 11:58 PM

gosh here is one I missed. You were enjoying breasts since the very beginning! heehee. (you can keep ranting about Soup. I understand!)

Phyllis Babcock

June 7, 2015 at 6:45 PM

I am so fortunate to still have my mom. A brief and precise poem my friend. love phyl

Laura Breidenthal

May 24, 2015 at 5:37 AM

A mother's affection can easily become a great force in our lives from years to come. I love the physicality of your poetry, that easily passes into more ethereal and spiritual for certain imaginations. Love you James! Hope all's well! Always, Laura

Constance La France

May 13, 2015 at 7:15 AM

James, beauty in a few words, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Jacqueline, my mother, I could not go to the cemetery to visit her on mothers day because I was working and it is very far away but I wanted to write a poem to remember her, that was not full of sadness

James Peranteau

May 13, 2015 at 7:40 AM

I'll tell you Constance, we are fellows, and your write was suffice with regard mother.The essence of your mother will forever be an embodied force about you and will materialize no mater where you are dear poet friend of mine ! Many blessings to you Constance, and I thank you kindly for taking time to review mine writes ......much love, james