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Mother's Day Hero

series haiku crooked paper heart fold is on the wrong side the right side gripping the crayon YOU ARE THE BEST, he labors tongue between his teeth can't wait till Sunday opening his backpack - his heart is broken Mom to the rescue his hero saves the day Elmer's glue and hugs

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Jerry Najera

Date: 5/21/2013 1:14:00 PM

well mannered* sorry.

Jerry Najera

Date: 5/21/2013 1:13:00 PM

This poem is awesome! I love my mom, so much, I wrote something for her too! I think that a well manned son comes only from the knowledge of there mother.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/18/2013 9:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Well done. AO

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2013 12:26:00 AM

this is so sweet!!! and congrats in the contest.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/17/2013 8:44:00 AM

love this....Elmer's glue has patched many a heart!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2013 7:28:00 AM

Aww this is so sweet. Congratulations, you did a great job of demonstrating a moms love.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2013 7:26:00 AM

Aww this is so sweet. Congratulations, you did a great job of demonstrating a moms love.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2013 10:11:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS, ! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/14/2013 3:48:00 AM

Very nice of you Reason. Clever write. Best wishes

Len Gasun

Date: 5/13/2013 4:44:00 PM

A very beautiful poem and chain of haiku for Mother's Day my dear friend, Reason. I love it and so enjoyed! Thanks a lot for sharing and your nice comments on my poem. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/12/2013 2:44:00 PM

Wonderful poem. Thanks for your visit to my poem. Loved always, bl

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/12/2013 1:24:00 PM

Awwww, cute series of haiku. Well done, Reason. Licia :-)