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Mother's Day Hero

series haiku

crooked paper heart
fold is on the wrong side
the right side

gripping the crayon
YOU ARE THE BEST, he labors
tongue between his teeth
	
can't wait till Sunday
opening his backpack -
his heart is broken

Mom to the rescue
his hero saves the day
Elmer's glue and hugs

Copyright © Reason A. Poteet | Year Posted 2013

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Jerry Najera Date: 5/21/2013 1:14:00 PM well mannered* sorry. Login to Reply

Jerry Najera Date: 5/21/2013 1:13:00 PM This poem is awesome! I love my mom, so much, I wrote something for her too! I think that a well manned son comes only from the knowledge of there mother. Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/18/2013 9:49:00 AM Congrats on your win. Well done. AO Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/18/2013 12:26:00 AM this is so sweet!!! and congrats in the contest. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 5/17/2013 8:44:00 AM love this....Elmer's glue has patched many a heart!!!! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/17/2013 7:28:00 AM Aww this is so sweet. Congratulations, you did a great job of demonstrating a moms love. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/16/2013 10:11:00 PM CONGRATULATIONS, ! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/14/2013 3:48:00 AM Very nice of you Reason. Clever write. Best wishes Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 5/13/2013 4:44:00 PM A very beautiful poem and chain of haiku for Mother's Day my dear friend, Reason. I love it and so enjoyed! Thanks a lot for sharing and your nice comments on my poem. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 5/12/2013 2:44:00 PM Wonderful poem. Thanks for your visit to my poem. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Delysia Hendricks Date: 5/12/2013 1:24:00 PM Awwww, cute series of haiku. Well done, Reason. Licia :-) Login to Reply