Reason A. Poteet Poet Haiku

Mother's Day Hero

series haiku

crooked paper heart
fold is on the wrong side
the right side

gripping the crayon
YOU ARE THE BEST, he labors
tongue between his teeth
	
can't wait till Sunday
opening his backpack -
his heart is broken

Mom to the rescue
his hero saves the day
Elmer's glue and hugs

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Jerry Najera May 21, 2013 at 1:14 PM well mannered* sorry.

Jerry Najera May 21, 2013 at 1:13 PM This poem is awesome! I love my mom, so much, I wrote something for her too! I think that a well manned son comes only from the knowledge of there mother.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 18, 2013 at 9:49 AM Congrats on your win. Well done. AO

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2013 at 12:26 AM this is so sweet!!! and congrats in the contest.

Carrie Richards May 17, 2013 at 8:44 AM love this....Elmer's glue has patched many a heart!!!!

Richard Lamoureux May 17, 2013 at 7:28 AM Aww this is so sweet. Congratulations, you did a great job of demonstrating a moms love.

Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2013 at 10:11 PM CONGRATULATIONS, ! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 14, 2013 at 3:48 AM Very nice of you Reason. Clever write. Best wishes

Len Gasun May 13, 2013 at 4:44 PM A very beautiful poem and chain of haiku for Mother's Day my dear friend, Reason. I love it and so enjoyed! Thanks a lot for sharing and your nice comments on my poem. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora

Bl Devnath May 12, 2013 at 2:44 PM Wonderful poem. Thanks for your visit to my poem. Loved always, bl

Delysia Hendricks May 12, 2013 at 1:24 PM Awwww, cute series of haiku. Well done, Reason. Licia :-)