Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Mother's Day

A special day for you my mother,                                                                                      there can be no other.                                                                                                               God made just one of you,                                                                                    as a new mother you had no clue.                                                                                            To raise a baby it would take a crew,                                                                                 many times my crying made you feel blue.                                                Then you watched me as I grew,                                                                                                 for one day I would be a lady~you just knew.                                                         One day I would be on my way as I flew,                                                                            now grown up I needed my own point of view. 
 

Date Written: 4/27/2022

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A Mother's Love, Tributes of Love for Mother's Day Poetry Contest                                                                                            Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley

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Komal Walimbe May 13, 2022 at 9:37 AM A wonderful write! A tribute to all the mothers around the world ,they are true superheroes! Have a great day Paula!:) Paula Goldsmith May 13, 2022 at 11:35 AM Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have this Mother's Day win. A tribute to mothers. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend..................

Valsa George May 6, 2022 at 12:19 AM God made just one mother of a kind for each child ! No one can take her place or substitute her. A lovely tribute to your mother! Congratulations dear Paula on your great win ! Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2022 at 9:12 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Mother's Day win. God does make mothers. My mother passed many years ago. I still miss her. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend writing away...................

Caren Krutsinger May 5, 2022 at 10:43 AM For sure "to raise a baby it would take a crew" - congratulations Paula! Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2022 at 9:10 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Mother's Day win. Today, it takes a crew to raise a baby. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend writing away...................

Vijay Pandit May 5, 2022 at 10:36 AM So heartfelt, Paula--congrats on your win. Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2022 at 9:07 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Mother's Day win. Glad you like my write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend writing away...................

Len Gasun May 4, 2022 at 7:13 PM This is a very wonderful and lovely dedication poem to your mom my dear friend Paula. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! Have a great day my dear friend. God bless! Hugs. Paula Goldsmith May 6, 2022 at 9:06 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Mother's Day win. Glad you love this write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend writing away...................

Bj Legros Kelley May 3, 2022 at 10:30 PM Paula, such a precious tribute to your mother! I hope she reads this :) Thank you so much for entering your poem, and honoring your mom with the sweetest gift ever, the loving words of a grateful daughter, how precious is your gift to her. God bless you, and I pray your mother and you have a wonderful Mother's Day! Congratulations dear poetess! Paula Goldsmith May 4, 2022 at 7:27 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this Mother's Day win in your contest. My mother passed many years ago. I still miss her. Hope you have a wonderful/blessed Mother's Day. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Darlene De Beaulieu April 28, 2022 at 12:46 PM Hello paula, this is a wonderful poem. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu May 2, 2022 at 10:11 AM Hello Paula, thank you I will enjoy my day writing away. ...Hugs Darlene Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2022 at 12:00 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Tom Cunningham April 28, 2022 at 2:41 AM Mothers are precious indeed Paula, a lovely tribute. Good luck in the contest. Tom Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2022 at 11:59 AM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................

Bernard Queeferson April 27, 2022 at 7:50 PM Such a beautiful poem. Bless both you and your mother. Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2022 at 11:54 AM Thanks for your note. It is good to see you. Hope you are OK. Thanks for the blessings. My mother passed many years ago. Still miss her. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................