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Mother's Day

no breakfast in bed vase of flowers on a grave distant memories

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/18/2018 4:33:00 PM
IMPACT still dancing in my heart. bbn
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Date: 3/13/2018 9:12:00 PM
Economy of language = Maximum impact. Impactful ink! Kudos.
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Date: 3/11/2018 3:42:00 PM
- My mother did not like to eat in bed ... but, loved flowers :) - The memories are in my heart :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 8:30:00 AM
You say so much in these short lines, Viv. Great senryu.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/11/2018 11:56:00 AM
Thanks, Agnes, time robs us all eventually. Viv x
Date: 3/11/2018 4:26:00 AM
Great senryu Viv, sadly many of us are with you on that one, but we have our fond memories. Tom
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/11/2018 11:57:00 AM
Yes, Tom, thank God for that, hope my frey cells hold out. Regards, Viv

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