Mother's Day

no breakfast in bed
vase of flowers on a grave
distant memories
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 4:33 PM
IMPACT still dancing in my heart. bbn
Wolf Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Economy of language = Maximum impact. Impactful ink! Kudos.
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 3:42 PM
- My mother did not like to eat in bed ... but, loved flowers :) - The memories are in my heart :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 8:30 AM
You say so much in these short lines, Viv. Great senryu.
Wigley Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Thanks, Agnes, time robs us all eventually. Viv x
Cunningham Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 4:26 AM
Great senryu Viv, sadly many of us are with you on that one, but we have our fond memories. Tom
Wigley Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Yes, Tom, thank God for that, hope my frey cells hold out. Regards, Viv
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