Motherhood

By giving birth you've lost much loveliness, but thou art lovelier now in fullness. Edited: From hugeness to fullness accdng to sir A.

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Valsa George

Date: 10/5/2022 5:53:00 AM

Jez, how right you are ! You have hit the nail on the head ! A woman becomes whole only with motherhood !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2020 7:50:00 PM

I see your first poem was also a winning poem. A very belated congratulations, my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2020 4:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, JCB ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 8/24/2020 3:12:00 AM

You describe motherhood very well in your short poem... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.

James Inman

Date: 5/7/2020 11:00:00 PM

A lovely first post.

Silent One

Date: 4/30/2020 1:47:00 PM

Yes that is motherhood....Children are worth it though.

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/15/2020 7:12:00 PM

I love the fullness of your poem. There is nothing more beautiful than a motherhood, well penned.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/15/2020 9:42:00 AM

A wonderful way to start your time here. A belated welcome to the soup. I enjoyed reading your writing this morning.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2020 3:53:00 PM

It's so interesting how you expressed this. Great to have such a talented poet among us at Soup! Thanks for your recent comments.

John Watt

Date: 4/13/2020 7:26:00 PM

A little late to welcome you to Soup, but I can say it's nice to have you here, JCB. You have a nice flair. I know many pregnant moms who would be happy to know that there is beauty in their temporary station in life. Well done!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2020 4:09:00 PM

These are two delightful lines to start off your Soup experience! In my humble opinion motherhood makes a women complete. ~ Regards // paul

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/13/2020 5:20:00 PM

Thank you dear poet Paul. You humble opinion is absolutely right. Stay safe.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/10/2020 10:41:00 AM

How perfectly said!

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2020 2:12:00 PM

Thank you dear poet Kim. More power!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/10/2020 10:18:00 AM

Oh, yes, delicately delectable and delightful. Welcome to Soup!

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2020 2:10:00 PM

Thank so much dear poet Caren for the words of encouragement. You lifted my spirit.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/2/2020 9:09:00 AM

So true JCB, Welcome to soup. Tom

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 1/31/2020 6:23:00 AM

Yes, that is the beauty of Motherhood, lovely couplet

Jcb Brul
Date: 1/31/2020 7:11:00 AM

You put a smile on my face sir A...Thank you so much for the appreciation.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2019 8:05:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. There is such hugeness with a new baby - and the equipment they take - extra huge. I hope to read more of your poems my friend.

Jcb Brul
Date: 1/4/2020 5:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for your warm welcome feedback..Will go through your poems in a while.