Benjamin Bartley Poet Senryu

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Really Psychku :  A nonsensical form of haiku (not very visual)

Mothergod Still Loves Fathergod

                                             He claims Creation.
                                         She claims Mitochondria.
                                                What's Reality?

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Shadow Hamilton June 30, 2024 at 2:18 PM Hi Benjamin I like it thought provoking and well written hugs Shadow

Benjamin Bartley June 30, 2024 at 10:35 AM Thanks for the education. The great "I AM THAT I AM" surely loves our attention. If it wasn't for the J naming, I would have thot you were explaining a Buddhist concept of God. Benjamin Bartley June 30, 2024 at 10:37 AM I certainly don't mean to be neutering God!

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2024 at 3:43 PM puzzling in many ways, Benjamin...a grand one!

Sara Kendrick June 26, 2024 at 3:29 AM God created the mitochondria. So, God is the creator and mankind plus womankind only passes along what God combines in the womb. Sara K Benjamin Bartley June 30, 2024 at 10:20 AM Male dominating religions love you. Benjamin Bartley June 30, 2024 at 10:19 AM Ignorance is bliss. Thanks for the comment. Opinions are wonderful aren't they?

Caryl Muzzey June 25, 2024 at 8:28 AM Wonderfully expressed! Love it!

Roses Roses June 24, 2024 at 4:24 PM Wow, very inciteful and thought provoking!

Karen Jones June 24, 2024 at 12:26 AM Very creative lol

David Crandall June 23, 2024 at 10:47 PM Haha, that's gonna have me scratching my head! Benjamin Bartley June 30, 2024 at 10:20 AM Life does that to me all the time!