Mother You Are

"I only wish that these words could accurately paint your picture"

                                    Mother you are the description of beauty
                                             You’re the definition of love.
                           You are a precious gift sent from the heavens above.
                              You are mountain peaks of picture-perfect peace
                                 You are grand valleys of valiance and virtue.
               With a presence so breathtaking, that lilies bow in awe before you.
                                    Mother you are graceful rivers of belief
                                             and refined streams of hope
                      You are fabulous fountains of fidelity that so freely overflow
                                   You are the sun’s radiance of courage.
                       Your inner light gleams brighter than all the stars in the sky
                     A sublime sparkle of strength and devotion is found in my eyes.
                          You are my strong tower; you’re my sanctuary of faith
         Mother you are a temple of wisdom, and in your heart I’ve found my refuge,
                                                     My serene safe place

Chiquita Chiamaka Baity 


Contest : 'Mother' 
Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ali Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Lovely poem very well expressed. I liked the quote too:)
Ekpemandu Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 4:37 PM
lovely dear...great imagination......i see perfection in every line..you nailed it on the head...am still jealous oo..great job
Brown Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Very good. Thanks for sharing
Benson Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 5:58 PM
A fine piece, dear. Well done.
Martin Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Chiquita, Would that I could have written something so beautuful, eloquent and loving for my own mother before she left this world. Again, you've outdone yourself as this one leaves me near speechless and in humbled awe of your poetics. So glad you enjoyed "The WORD" and THIS poem and YOU are what the WORD is ALL about:) God bless, Terry
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 8:44 AM
I especially like the last two lines..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara
A   Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 10:50 PM
A well done entry! A mother is indeed the best. I love it C.C., good luck & Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night~ LINDA
Sivey Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 10:32 PM
An exquisite write! Your mother sounds so special and I know you love her very much! I just wish I could write such a tribute to my mother someday!! Thank you for submitting this for all to read!! Good luck in the contest!!
Ball Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 9:30 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your mom. I hope you have this put on a plaque and give it to her for her birthday or Mother's Day or Christmas or something. She'll love it. God Bless, JB Good luck on the contest. :)
Francis Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 8:15 PM
nice piece as usual,best of luck in the contest.
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