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Sept. 6, 2024    639am

Mom kept sharing her wisdom since before I was sixth Ignited lovingly in her heart with fervor caring depth. She said, “If you always pray or talk to God, He’ll send angels God guides you anywhere, anytime with or without problems.” She patiently gave pieces of advice not only when I was twelfth Incessant reminder with my siblings, she’s our bright light bulb. Keeping her best to mold us with great tenderness and warmth Saying, “Think before you do or say, choose what’s right not false”. “Love, respect, share, forgive and understand other’s foible Perfection is only in heaven, not found in material worlds.” She’s my crying shoulder when I’m in pain and in wounds ‘Till adulthood, she’s my best refuge when I’m anxious. If once and a while she got mad to us like a hungry monster, It’s an unconditional love…her heart-wreckage if we’re spoilt.

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Date: 9/21/2024 10:18:00 AM
MOTHER SAID with Refractory Rhymes Contest Judged: 9/15/2024 12:16:00 AM Sponsored by: Suzette Richards Place 7 (1-10 Primier Contest in single w)
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Date: 9/17/2024 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Aren't mom's wonderful most of the time. Sara K
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/17/2024 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear poet friend for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. Yes they are for me. I'm sure you're a wonderful mom too not only a friend or sister. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 9/16/2024 3:28:00 AM
'Perfection is only in heaven' such a nice thought, mom is the best refuge. beautiful poem dear poet. congratulations on your win.
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/16/2024 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your insightful comment and warm congratulatory greetings. I'll visit you soon ok. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 9/15/2024 7:42:00 AM
Wonderful poem, congratulations
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/16/2024 4:13:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear poet friend Tery for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings. I'll visit your page soon ok. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 9/9/2024 1:38:00 PM
Dear len, this is so beautiful and lucky are the ones that receive such unconditional love from their mothers and parents, and your couplet here flows so well and is so touching and so very soulful! You write from your heart and that, i can feel through your well woven words! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always talented soul
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2024 6:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging words my dearest poet friend Ink. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 9/6/2024 9:08:00 AM
I enjoy reading your wonderful write. A wise Mother you are blessed with. Hugs...  Have a fun/blessed day writing away...................
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/8/2024 8:47:00 AM
True and I thank God my dearest poet friend. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Have a fun/blessed day writing away too. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

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