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Poetry/Verse/Refractory Rhymes/Mother Said
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All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, August 31, 2024
For the contest, 'MOTHER SAID with Refractory Rhymes
Sponsor, Suzette Richards. Judged 09/15/2024

Second Place

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The love between a mother and daughter is like nothing else
in the world. It has no rules, it dares all things and crushes all
that stand in its way, and cannot be destroyed, even by death.

                                             Quote by _Constance

mother said that I was her angel she surrounded me always with her love and warmth and since her death I have been empty there are days when I am angry with my mother I could share each secret every nightmare dreamt she would help me solve a problem and send away each monster now, my heart has been pierced and on my soul are forever bleeding wounds there are days my misery comes to engulf oh, what I would do for one more glimpse of all things mother said not a single one was false her wise words to me were the best amongst all others ... she had a wisdom and depth and now, that I have lost mother ... I have nothing

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Date: 9/16/2024 3:15:00 AM
congratulations dear poet friend, your words are eloquent.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/16/2024 5:43:00 AM
Thriveni, thank you for the congratultions and compliment, Constance
Date: 9/15/2024 7:36:00 AM
A wonderful poem, congratulations
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Date: 9/16/2024 5:43:00 AM
Terry, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 9/15/2024 6:36:00 AM
congratulations on your win. we will all connect again with our loved ones one day. for now we live with their spirits. We might think we are alone and empty, but we are never alone.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/16/2024 5:48:00 AM
Karen, thank you so much for congratulations, and comment, Constance
Date: 9/15/2024 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sometimes a mother can be a very special person which is an added bonus to a fulfilled life. Sara K
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Constance La France
Date: 9/16/2024 5:49:00 AM
Sara, thank you so much fo the congratulations and for th compliment and comment, Constance
Date: 9/15/2024 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in my contest, Constance. Your poem resonated with me and your quote that I can read now, contains many a truism. Regards, Suzette
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Constance La France
Date: 9/16/2024 5:49:00 AM
Suzette, thank you for the contest and my great placment and for the congratulation, comment, Constance
Date: 9/3/2024 8:59:00 PM
you are her gift, you have everything, she now lives in you, lives through you, lives for you. let her in dear poet friend, feel blessed. An emotional write, I teared up with your lines. I'm sorry for the loss & sadness.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2024 11:28:00 AM
Thriveni, thank you for the compliment and nice comment, and compliment, Constance
Date: 8/31/2024 4:14:00 PM
Great write! A favorite.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/31/2024 4:15:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment and FAV, appreciate, Constance
Date: 8/31/2024 9:06:00 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely yet sad write. Great picture. Love your quote. I know how you feel. FAV for me.... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away...............
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Constance La France
Date: 8/31/2024 4:16:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the compliment, comment and FAV, appreciate, Constance

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