Constance La France Poet Verse

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Poetry/Verse/Refractory Rhymes/Mother Said
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Written, August 31, 2024
For the contest, 'MOTHER SAID with Refractory Rhymes
Sponsor, Suzette Richards. Judged 09/15/2024

Second Place

The love between a mother and daughter is like nothing else
in the world. It has no rules, it dares all things and crushes all
that stand in its way, and cannot be destroyed, even by death.

                                             Quote by _Constance

Mother Said

mother said that I was her angel
she surrounded me always with her love and warmth
and since her death I have been empty
there are days when I am angry

with my mother I could share each secret
every nightmare dreamt
she would help me solve a problem
and send away each monster

now, my heart has been pierced
and on my soul are forever bleeding wounds
there are days my misery comes to engulf
oh, what I would do for one more glimpse

of all things mother said not a single one was false
her wise words to me were the best amongst
all others ... she had a wisdom and depth
and now, that I have lost mother ... I have nothing

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thriveni c mysore September 16, 2024 at 3:15 AM congratulations dear poet friend, your words are eloquent. Constance La France September 16, 2024 at 5:43 AM Thriveni, thank you for the congratultions and compliment, Constance

Terry Miller September 15, 2024 at 7:36 AM A wonderful poem, congratulations Constance La France September 16, 2024 at 5:43 AM Terry, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, Constance

Karen Croft September 15, 2024 at 6:36 AM congratulations on your win. we will all connect again with our loved ones one day. for now we live with their spirits. We might think we are alone and empty, but we are never alone. Constance La France September 16, 2024 at 5:48 AM Karen, thank you so much for congratulations, and comment, Constance

Sara Kendrick September 15, 2024 at 4:56 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sometimes a mother can be a very special person which is an added bonus to a fulfilled life. Sara K Constance La France September 16, 2024 at 5:49 AM Sara, thank you so much fo the congratulations and for th compliment and comment, Constance

thriveni c mysore September 3, 2024 at 8:59 PM you are her gift, you have everything, she now lives in you, lives through you, lives for you. let her in dear poet friend, feel blessed. An emotional write, I teared up with your lines. I'm sorry for the loss & sadness. Constance La France September 5, 2024 at 11:28 AM Thriveni, thank you for the compliment and nice comment, and compliment, Constance

Paula Goldsmith August 31, 2024 at 9:06 AM WOW!!! What a lovely yet sad write. Great picture. Love your quote. I know how you feel. FAV for me.... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away............... Constance La France August 31, 2024 at 4:16 PM Paula, thank you for the compliment, comment and FAV, appreciate, Constance