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Mother Nature's Favorite Season


Silent stars start to shine in heat like burnished gold-
The weather is quite temperate tonight; a mild tangerine 
eventide setting of the sun has brought a new lease on life. 
Untrimmed cherry blossoms in the shade sway outside 
the gazebo my late sister made by hand-
      (and it is still my most prized possession from heaven)

Peony buds are flourishing this time of year in Michigan.
They always have the most lovely complexion-
slightly pink with shades of red hues; gleaming under the 
heat at noon.

Grains of soft sand sift through my bare toes-
sweet surrender along pebbled shores with reveries flowing
into eternal cosmic grace. 
                                  (brilliantly splendid)

       ~Silent Stars start to shine in heat like burnished gold-
         soon the soft essence of Autumn shall begin to unfold~



July 31, 2019
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A Summer's Day Redo Contest

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Date: 8/30/2019 5:57:00 PM
A gorgeous vision of nature's gifts Luloo. Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:16:00 PM
I love your description of cherry blossoms and buds in Michigan, thanks for entering my contest!
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Date: 8/2/2019 7:54:00 PM
This is wonderful, Lu Loo: You have used all the challenge words so beautifully and none seem forced or out of place. A sure winner. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 8/1/2019 1:51:00 AM
absolutely beautiful imagery LuLoo and such precious memories of Karen, I especially love the final couplet:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2019 10:10:00 PM
Excellent job interwoven with very personal touches. As beautiful as each line is, the poem brought me down because it reminded me that summer is almost over and I DONT WANT THAT. Seriously, seamlessly flowing imagery captivated me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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