Mother Nature Crying

A summer storm
                                    glowing sky,howling wind
                                        Mothers tears falling.
                                                         Teresa Skyles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 27, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Teresa. Love, Carol
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June 26, 2011 at 1:11 AM
Lovely Haiku, Teresa. Many congrats on your WIN.Lainie
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June 26, 2011 at 1:11 AM
Lovely Haiku, Teresa. Many congrats on your WIN.Lainie
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June 25, 2011 at 5:41 PM
If you place a period at the upper left hand corner, it will keep your lines in place where you put them..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats...Sara
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June 24, 2011 at 11:34 PM
Definitely feels like that, Teresa :) this is such a vivid piece-- over here it's just been raining as well.... congrats for being in the winners' list :D
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June 24, 2011 at 9:16 PM
I love the third line personification and how it could also be a real mother crying! congrats for this one, teresa.
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June 24, 2011 at 6:51 PM
Congrats Teresa on your HM in the contest with this beautiful write my friend.. enjoy special honor with luv...
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June 23, 2011 at 7:07 PM
how creatively beautiful Teresa my friend.. an elegant entry luv..good luck.. precious one..
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