Mother Nature Crying

A summer storm glowing sky,howling wind Mothers tears falling. Teresa Skyles

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Teresa. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 1:11:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Teresa. Many congrats on your WIN.Lainie

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 1:11:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Teresa. Many congrats on your WIN.Lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 5:41:00 PM

If you place a period at the upper left hand corner, it will keep your lines in place where you put them..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats...Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/24/2011 11:34:00 PM

Definitely feels like that, Teresa :) this is such a vivid piece-- over here it's just been raining as well.... congrats for being in the winners' list :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 9:16:00 PM

I love the third line personification and how it could also be a real mother crying! congrats for this one, teresa.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 6:51:00 PM

Congrats Teresa on your HM in the contest with this beautiful write my friend.. enjoy special honor with luv...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/23/2011 7:07:00 PM

how creatively beautiful Teresa my friend.. an elegant entry luv..good luck.. precious one..