Mother Nature

The sky opened up,
tree branches blew by swiflty,
the surf was rising,
hurricane winds, ferocious,
earth and sky having a fight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 5:51 PM
Very nice personifcation, Susan
Mehta Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 4:20 AM
Very impressive write with nice images of the Mother nature
Devonshire Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 3:07 PM
You describe the hurricane well, Susan. Do you live in the South? We haven't been hit by one yet this year, but when these storms arrive id does seem like the earth and sky are having a fight. Love, Carolyn
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August 27, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Lovely creative wwrite Susan.. hope u will enter some of the contests posted on the contest page .. a sure way to have your poetry noticed and read more frequently..luv.. happy weekend..
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