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Mother, Mother Where Are You?

Murderer Of a child's innocence. Too late to forgive Her hate-filled drunkeness when Expounding on this word. Rather forget than pretend she cared. Maybe in some Other lifetime we Two will work through our History to find the Elation this word brings when Remembered by others. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ for a Rambling Poet's contest, May 2010 ~~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2010 8:58:00 AM
Deep and touching...Heartfelt poem indeed,dear Sue..Charma.
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Date: 5/3/2010 8:24:00 AM
I do hope that this write of yours was just for the contest, very emotional!!! Thank you for sharing and for your comments....Gert
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:29:00 PM
Very emotional and heartfelt, Sue. Thank you for your kind comment on 'First Love'. I will be back soon. This looks like a winner to me. Love, Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:10:00 PM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/2/2010 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Sue for helping me with the sestina...the Van Gogh one is not correct for the contest because I believe I had too many stresses per line...but....the write was a "ride" I truely blew it out in 2 hours non stop...I was very happy with it and so really appreciate your comments! (Me and my Mom had a similiar rough go...thank God we were able to mend before her passing) Big Hugs Light & Love
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