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Mother May I

Mother may I Go out and play My child Have you cleaned your room today Are your toys packed away in your toy chest with care Yes mother yes its all in there Did you make your bed like i showed you how yes mother yes may I go now Yes son yes after a brief inspection son shakes his head not what I was expecting Never-mind mother I'm going to my room oh by the way can you hand me the broom?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/13/2012 10:10:00 AM
Nice writtenn:) Its very nice..Keep up the great work..:) OxOx Love, Hania Siddiqui
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Date: 9/10/2012 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Loved this poem.
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:49:00 PM
Love this poem here..original!!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 7/26/2012 12:04:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Lisa,hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - You written well and this is a cute poem. - love from Anne-Lise :)
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