Mother May I

When I am grown and full of things
May I be known as a beautiful queen 
Just like you are so politically proud
Love spirited heart beneath cocoa breast of brown
That nurses faithful joy
Blessing someone every day
Giving praise to the Lord
Rocking babies baking cakes
May I give as much and live as well
Earn your tender touch
 Of prophecy time will tell
And for many moons
Can my children maze 
How natural beauty blooms
So true it never fades
May I live as to honor you
Mother may I be like you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 7:01 PM
I enjoy this poem which pays tribute to a mother's love. It was interesting to be written from a child's point of view. It was an excellent read. Thank you for your talent.
Jones Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 12:43 AM
Aw you are so sweet poetess! Thank you Hilda!
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 7:25 PM
Such a sweet tribute to your Mom --- and to your writing skill. Kudos, Gershon
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 12:14 AM
I appreciate your kindness Gershon.
Beaufort Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 5:24 AM
A wonderful tribute to moms. The way you phrase this, I am convinced you will be at least as good or better. When you can "see" like this, it reveals what you are made of. A real privilege to read what comes from your heart.
Jones Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 5:58 AM
I’m a mom and not perfect but my love is great! My mom is incredible and inspired this poem of course ! My son is an only child now in his 30s ! He is on this site poet Tahj Jones. He works full time and is a full time college student! I’m very proud as a single parent he managed to stay out of trouble and be a good person with great character
Canerdy Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 8:17 PM
Karen, this descriptive poem conveys a sweet, touching message--very moving. Janice
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 8:19 PM
Aw thank you Janice!
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