Mother May...

Mother May I confess
I've traded my soul to live
in the bliss of a wind.
Surrounding my body
is a sensual sound
a liquid motion
in the air around
drifting up from a rift
uplifting from the ground
leads me away to a timeless cloud
Mother May I, just say out loud

May I not want ...

To come inside Just now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 10, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Aye! It is the feeling a sailor has- know this all too well. Loved the poem!
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November 13, 2009 at 3:18 PM
Heavy duty wording here... great message too... excellent write and powerful thoughts... enjoyed... luv 2 U ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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