Mother Elephant

If only you knew…if only you knew…
How a mother’s tears flooded her eyes;
How blood oozed from her aching nipples;
And how she quarrelled with a stubborn quarry,
Lashing the quarry with her shrunk trunk, 
To save her drowning son. 


She commoved herself,
Looking for her darling baby,
Running up - the rocky hill,
And tumbling down – the prickly valley, 
Yet, no laugh, no groan, no mourn,
No whine…nothing did she hear.

She ran, wailing and mourning,
Frenziedly smelling his footprints,
Blowing the dust and oozing the blood.
With rocking, swaying and head bobbing,
She headed to a quarry.
  
She screamed like an angry wind,  
Spinning, beating her heart, 
When seeing her drowning baby, 
Feebly groaning, “PaWooing”   
In a mud-splashed, narrow quarry.

With flood-smothering eyes,
Oozing, aching blood from her nipples,
She lashed the quarry with her shrunk trunk, 
To save her drowning son,
Her darling son, her life —
If only you knew how…if only you knew…


Oct. 24, 2020 
If only you knew Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kankanamge Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 8:45 AM
A beautiful, emotional poem.
Kindness Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Dear Indrajith Kankanamge, Thank you very much for your comment
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 8:40 AM
- A deeply moving poem, L.K. - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kindness Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Dear Sunshine Smile, Thank you very much for your comment.
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Such a sad emotional verse, I enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Kindness Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:11 PM
Dear Eve Roper, Thank you very much for your lovely comment and wishes. May you be well and happy..!
Seeker Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:20 PM
Powerful! Congrats on your win!
Kindness Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Dear Unseeking Seeker, Thank you very much for your wishes.May you be well and happy always
Koplin Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Kindness Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Dear Mark Koplin, Thank you very much for your kind wishes.
Y. Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:53 AM
WoW! What a touching and moving write! It brought tears to my eyes. What a mother (parent)wouldn’t do to say their child. You expressed that very well in this well written emotional write. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
Kindness Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Dear Alexis Y. Thank you very much for your comments and appreciation.
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:20 AM
I am back to congratulate you on your great placement!!
Kindness Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:49 PM
Dear Newton Arach, Thank you very much again.Wish you all the best
One Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Sad and harrowing take on this contest..Congratulations on your placement..
Kindness Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Dear Silent One, Thank you very much for your comment and the place given.Thank you very much again
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 5:39 AM
This is a great write, Loving Kindness!! I like the choice of your subject matter and how you interpret it. Your presentation is so unique, too. You just present the scene and let us see, follow and feel it. Good Luck in Silent One's contest!!
Kindness Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Dear Newton Arach, Thank you very much for your comment on the poem. Thank you very much again
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