Mother Elephant

If only you knew…if only you knew…
How a mother’s tears flooded her eyes;
How blood oozed from her aching nipples;
And how she quarrelled with a stubborn quarry,
Lashing the quarry with her shrunk trunk, 
To save her drowning son. 


She commoved herself,
Looking for her darling baby,
Running up - the rocky hill,
And tumbling down – the prickly valley, 
Yet, no laugh, no groan, no mourn,
No whine…nothing did she hear.

She ran, wailing and mourning,
Frenziedly smelling his footprints,
Blowing the dust and oozing the blood.
With rocking, swaying and head bobbing,
She headed to a quarry.
  
She screamed like an angry wind,  
Spinning, beating her heart, 
When seeing her drowning baby, 
Feebly groaning, “PaWooing”   
In a mud-splashed, narrow quarry.

With flood-smothering eyes,
Oozing, aching blood from her nipples,
She lashed the quarry with her shrunk trunk, 
To save her drowning son,
Her darling son, her life —
If only you knew how…if only you knew…


Oct. 24, 2020 
If only you knew Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/28/2020 8:45:00 AM
A beautiful, emotional poem.
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Date: 10/28/2020 9:20:00 AM
Dear Indrajith Kankanamge, Thank you very much for your comment
Date: 10/27/2020 8:40:00 AM
- A deeply moving poem, L.K. - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2020 9:19:00 AM
Dear Sunshine Smile, Thank you very much for your comment.
Date: 10/26/2020 8:58:00 PM
Such a sad emotional verse, I enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:11:00 PM
Dear Eve Roper, Thank you very much for your lovely comment and wishes. May you be well and happy..!
Date: 10/26/2020 8:20:00 PM
Powerful! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:09:00 PM
Dear Unseeking Seeker, Thank you very much for your wishes.May you be well and happy always
Date: 10/26/2020 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/26/2020 7:53:00 PM
Dear Mark Koplin, Thank you very much for your kind wishes.
Date: 10/26/2020 10:53:00 AM
WoW! What a touching and moving write! It brought tears to my eyes. What a mother (parent)wouldn’t do to say their child. You expressed that very well in this well written emotional write. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
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Date: 10/26/2020 7:51:00 PM
Dear Alexis Y. Thank you very much for your comments and appreciation.
Date: 10/26/2020 10:20:00 AM
I am back to congratulate you on your great placement!!
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Date: 10/26/2020 7:49:00 PM
Dear Newton Arach, Thank you very much again.Wish you all the best
Date: 10/26/2020 9:10:00 AM
Sad and harrowing take on this contest..Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:16:00 AM
Dear Silent One, Thank you very much for your comment and the place given.Thank you very much again
Date: 10/26/2020 5:39:00 AM
This is a great write, Loving Kindness!! I like the choice of your subject matter and how you interpret it. Your presentation is so unique, too. You just present the scene and let us see, follow and feel it. Good Luck in Silent One's contest!!
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:17:00 AM
Dear Newton Arach, Thank you very much for your comment on the poem. Thank you very much again
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