Mother Earth's Touch--Sharon's Acrostic

T enderly, Mother Earth, allow me April's dew
O pening my senses for barbed thoughts to rest
U pon lean nights  pained by winter memoirs:
C uddle these breaths unreleased, till I am
H ealed by the gleam of your spring's awakening.



Contest: Sharon Gulley's Touch Me With Words
6/28/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kiser Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 12:55 PM
I'm still trying to catch up; lots of new poetry this year. I agree, it's a winner.
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Wow! A winner I read here, Nette:) simply awesome:)
Downing  Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 7:33 PM
Just fabulous...
Parker Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 10:26 AM
To sit and release each tension felt, to be held in the palm of nature in comfort taking each deep breath
Turner Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Nothing like nature to touch the heart, nette. A beauty of an acrostic!
Carmack Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 10:39 PM
How I do love your style & I hope Sharon does too. Good luck with hugs.
Smith Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Lovely Nette.
Roper Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Elegant, Nette, a winning write :) ~*
Hamilton Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Soo nice Nette, your word choices and pairings are exquisite, healed by the gleam, wow!
Ongado Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Speechless! Browsing through pages, I read this moving poem filled with longing and flawless impressions.
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:21 PM
What a beautiful well written acrostic Nette. I love it :)
Green Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 3:18 PM
Oh my word...once again Nette, you come through with something so fantastic and perfect for the contest, making me ask myself again...why do I even bother entering. :) This was beautifully incredible my friend.
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