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Mother Earth's Element

The purple lines of mid-evening
 Announces that lush of plump earth
Will be arriving soon from behind 
As fluff of clouds sweep the red of clay.
In a starry blink of a landscape 
Which partially hides her face 
Full of style and lilting glory; 
And In her court are a thousand fruitage 
Sharing their heavenly light; 

To twinkle through the heavens 
With a lovely dazzling vision, 
While I relish this bright beauty 
My feet rushing  to find my place
 Cuddling this iridescent display.


Contest Elements Part 1: Earth,  Brian Davey
3/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 20, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Nette, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
Raven Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read Nette....Vlad.
Cheema Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 8:36 AM
An enjoyable read, Nette! Congrats!
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette:)
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win nette.... big congrats!
Scars Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo :)
Warrior Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Congrats on the Win! nette...^WW^
Davey Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
Marty Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 6:34 AM
Mother Earth gives and we need to care for her; we forget that! Astounding poem!
Turner Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Your genius is exposed. Are you blushing? Peace dear lady:)
Heller Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 5:12 AM
Beautiful work, Nette
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March 12, 2016 at 5:02 AM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - Well chosen words :)- Luck in contest - Happy Saturday !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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