Mother Earth's Element

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Adorned by cycles in rich décor, she refills her bounty, her lush gifts as Mother Earth nourishes a womb ; caressing seeds of life to unfold into fertile roots which tend my hearth, and layers of her skin gather the fields, where herds of cattle, rows of boughs roam regaling toil’s leisure , gold the corn… Pleased with the laughter of womenfolk carrying fruits riper than sunlight her earthy breath at ease like a dance alive in continual motion: yet this maiden’s glory longs for time boney spine aging from burnt decay while she recalls the fresh of pure mist; awaiting man to cradle her again. Contest Elements Part 1: Earth, Brian Davey 3/12/2016

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:35:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:27:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read Nette....Vlad.
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Date: 3/17/2016 8:36:00 AM
An enjoyable read, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette:)
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:53:00 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win nette.... big congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2016 9:42:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo :)
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Date: 3/16/2016 9:13:00 PM
Congrats on the Win! nette...^WW^
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
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Date: 3/13/2016 6:34:00 AM
Mother Earth gives and we need to care for her; we forget that! Astounding poem!
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:41:00 AM
Your genius is exposed. Are you blushing? Peace dear lady:)
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Date: 3/12/2016 5:12:00 AM
Beautiful work, Nette
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Date: 3/12/2016 5:02:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - Well chosen words :)- Luck in contest - Happy Saturday !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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