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Mother Earth

Out of Mothers' breasts Flow the essence of all life Come drink thrive and live Entered in Raul Moreno’s Contest-Rhythm of the Falls

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2013 11:21:00 AM

Hi Annalise, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/22/2013 11:16:00 AM

Annalise, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 11/19/2013 6:34:00 PM

Well crated short poem. I love it.

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 11/19/2013 6:33:00 AM

† While She Surely Knows Whom Her Daddyyyy Is * Unlike Countless Misled As Informed Children Throughout These Generations Across Time His Planet Earth ˜ As Their Psalmist Once Wrote Long Long Ago: Come, Let Us Eat Drink And Be Merry, For, Tomorrow We Shall Die ? Thus, Would Someone Please Clean-Up All The Toxins As Pollution Filling Our Oceans, Rivers, Forest; What's Remains Of Them ? And Soils Drenched Not Only With Crossbones Of Sorrows But Also, Their Precious Childrens Innocent Blood ˜ You Paint Her Creation Quite Beautifully Congrats &, Happy Holidays ˜ Love John

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/14/2009 6:53:00 PM

Beautiful words about the Earth. Nice personification. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Milton Toran

Date: 11/7/2009 10:09:00 PM

As I said before, you're becoming one of my favorites. Why? Because I love haiku. Especially when haiku is written by someone who has a God-given talent. Thanks for sharing. Milt

John Freeman

Date: 10/23/2009 7:40:00 PM

Good luck Audrey, this Haiku is a winner, in my book, never mind the contest. Sincerely, Love, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 10/17/2009 11:10:00 AM

Super Haiku Audrey >> James

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/14/2009 11:44:00 AM

love this xo raiin

Marty Owens

Date: 10/14/2009 9:10:00 AM

I love this Audrey....Good luck in the contest...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/14/2009 7:37:00 AM

It gives me great pleasure to be able to read your poetry today Audrey. As we never know what tomorrow will bring. I thank you for sharing your writing with us today. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/13/2009 11:06:00 AM

Good luck in the contest. Different approach to the picture but I definitely see this there. Keep writing. Sara