Mother

MOTHER Who remembers waiting to see her children's faces Fingers, feet and eyes weak and feeble cries "Mother"

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/6/2017 7:46:00 PM

I remember my mother just as you described in this thoughtful poem, Lenna. Welcome to the Soup. I loved reading this poem as my debut foray into your work. Keep on dropping the love and knowledge. May love light your path always. Romantic Warrior

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/26/2017 4:46:00 PM

Thank You Freddie, for the welcome and I am glad you like this. :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/6/2017 5:37:00 PM

I liked the poem as a good read, it has a very pleasing, relatable quality to it, that's easily recognizable. Emile.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/26/2017 4:44:00 PM

Thank You kindly Emile :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/6/2017 4:10:00 PM

So true and nicely expressed Lenna.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/26/2017 4:44:00 PM

Thank You Chris :) I just found this comment - not sure how I missed it to begin with :)