Mother

When I was a crying infant,
wanted to be in someone's hand,
the sudden relaxation was bright,
when you came in front of my eyes.
	A similar situation had happened,
	when you in the crowd wanted my hand,
	the sudden relaxation was bright,
	when I came in front of your eyes.
When my legs were not so strong, 
and I needed a support,
your fingers made me balanced,
and I walked ahead on road.
	A similar situation will arrive,
	and I promise in advance,
	of using stick instead of me ,
	you will never get a chance.
You are my strength,weakness and inspiration,
and I will always keep you high,
I will touch the sky with glory,
for one smile with sense of pride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/30/2013 10:49:00 AM
Yes! A mother should feel wonderful after reading your lines. There is no indication of laboring here. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Simran Aggarwal
Date: 1/3/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much daver.
Date: 5/9/2013 9:30:00 PM
Hi Simran, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Simran Aggarwal
Date: 5/10/2013 11:53:00 AM
thanks for praising. May I know your name? And I have also submitted one more poem titled "Imagination". I hope you"ll enjoy it.
Date: 5/4/2013 12:14:00 PM
about your poem: This is a nice lovely poem for any mother. It was nice reading how lovely the meaning of glory and pride originate from when it comes to your breathing heart... xox~Linda
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Date: 5/4/2013 12:12:00 PM
Simran, , Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Simran Aggarwal
Date: 5/10/2013 11:57:00 AM
Thanks for commenting Linda. I have looked for many contests as you suggested and I have also submitted one more poem titled "Imagination". Hope you"ll like it.
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