Michael Smith Poet Rhyme

Mother

Mother you are sun
Love is warmth
And I am earth 

Days that pass
You shine upon paths
From whence I was birthed

Essential to His plan
You are heaven's crossroads
The whole, of family's universe

Mother you are sun
Love is warmth
And I am Earth

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2012 at 2:29 PM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick May 17, 2012 at 12:47 PM Very creative work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor May 16, 2012 at 2:45 PM Congrats on your win, Mike. Outstanding write. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

David Williams May 16, 2012 at 1:22 AM Michael congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2012 at 12:03 AM Michael, , congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD

Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM Michael, , congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD

Kim Merryman April 6, 2012 at 11:40 AM I love your use of metaphors, Michael. Congrats on your win! Love, KIm

Carol Sunshine Brown April 5, 2012 at 6:35 AM A belated congratulations to you for your win in P.D's "Mothers day" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2012 at 9:56 PM MICHAEL, Congratulations with your beautiful and heart touching mother'' poem. thank you for supporting my contest*. Have yourself a good night. It was an honor having your poem in my contest, luv~PD Michael Smith April 4, 2012 at 5:47 AM Thanks but the real honors go to my mother who loved me, put up with me and inspired me.

Joyce Johnson April 3, 2012 at 8:48 PM Very nicely written. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Michael Smith April 4, 2012 at 5:48 AM Thanks Joyce.

Ralph Taylor April 3, 2012 at 7:36 PM Congrats on your win, Mike. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph Michael Smith April 3, 2012 at 8:28 PM Thanks Ralph, glad you enjoyed it.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 9, 2011 at 11:59 AM Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon Michael. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 8, 2011 at 7:17 PM Awesome dedication to your mother or Mother's day! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

John Aaron Green May 8, 2011 at 6:09 PM that is one of the best mothersday poems i have ever read, great words, and thanks for sharing it..