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Mother

Mother!!! We cry out each time, FATHER!!! We don't all the time. Wherever we are, she is there, No matter the distance, she is near. We cry on her in the midnight, She gives us attention without thinking twice, We should love her, We should adore her. She is always there when father isn't, She finds you, when you get missing, She makes my day, She didn't care when giving birth to me in pain. She stood by me when no one did, She dressed my bed whenever I want to sleep. What would it take to pay her back? I think you have to make her to understand, That really she did a great job, Bringing this wonderful being into her world. It is not too much to ask, Let’s not be ashamed and close our face with a mask. No matter what she looks like, She is still the one who gave us the life. I wish I could see her now, But I know she hears when I shout... MAMA...

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Date: 3/31/2011 3:14:00 PM
This poem is beautiful and heart twisting because you express how absolutly great the loss of the subject so passionately Great write
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Date: 3/31/2011 3:08:00 PM
thanks judy, but my problem is that i don't really know the form. just chose narrative.
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:51:00 PM
Nice try on yr narritive poem. Good use of emotions. your words paint alot of love for your Mother, nice work Judy
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