Mother

Morning sun by her it shines Ocean wide, her love to mine Times she'll yell, times she'll weep Hoping tomorrow's night would be a good sleep Early up by day but late to bed at night Rest mother please...before the fading light.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Celine. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2012 12:33:00 PM

Great one honoring your mother..Congrats on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/16/2012 2:23:00 PM

Congrats on your well written, well deserved 1st place win, Celine. Awesome piece. great job. kudos. hugs, Ralph

David Williams

Date: 5/16/2012 1:17:00 AM

Celine congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2012 11:45:00 PM

Celine, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD

James Fraser

Date: 7/3/2010 5:29:00 AM

Your mum is obviously one special lady Celene, lovely tribute to her >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2010 6:01:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Celine. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/15/2010 8:48:00 AM

how sweet very nice and welcome to poetry soup faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2010 7:53:00 AM

Wonderfult Acrostic to your Mother ... they are truly special...luv.. "Sweethearr"