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Mother, Magical, Moment Words Sponsored by: Constance La France Written 11/13/2023

"Mere echoes of changing seasons passed, Mother Nature doesn't give it a second chance or through as the axis shifts." quote by poet Mother Nature's quenching heartbeat, Sipping the wavering unfurl dawn sun. It teases yellow, and green loveliness Of her rich breast, ripple dress endowment. Sweet scented fragrance embracing of spring. Bees dart, nuzzle among open vernal parasol blooms. Iridescent organza rotates, awaiting playful feet, Pollen dress laden in ambrosia, a golden dream. Sun blending amber and lemon hues of summer Rays of warmth, flicker through waves of clouds. Indigo bunting perch on a wild sunflower Amid a brilliant and pleasant rising strawberry moon. Autumnal tint in the vast radiant cool evening sky. The rustling crunch of scarlet and golden leaves that fall. Living benevolent trees with generating slumber. Chill wraith perigean full moon, fades into the ink-black heaven. Mother nature slowly does sleep beneath cold snow. Winter's breath blows when flowers are scarce. Birds migrate, bees huddle together to keep warm. Darkness slowly creeps amid shivering twilight.

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Date: 11/16/2023 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations Dear Eve, on your fabulous win. I really like your take on the word "Mother" - how wonderful are the images depicting Mother Nature !
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Date: 11/16/2023 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. A creative write/quote. I really enjoyed this one. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 11/15/2023 9:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Hugs.
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Date: 11/14/2023 2:39:00 PM
what a beautiful take on the writing contest prompt. Your poem was filled with so much exquisite imagery about mother nature and the change of the seasons. I especially liked 'Sun blending amber and lemon hues of summer ' This is a masterpiece and I'm faving it! Well done, Eve!
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Date: 11/14/2023 2:37:00 PM
Great idea for this contest and you use of mother for the prompt... So much imagery throughout your poem which describes the impact of mother nature..
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Date: 11/14/2023 11:49:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful imagery worthy of a high placement. Hugs and blessings.
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Date: 11/14/2023 9:45:00 AM
Such an awesome take on the theme. Our planet is so rich and diverse. You described it so poetically
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