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Mother, Magical Moment words Contest Sponsored by Constance la France 11/13/23

It is almost a year since

My lovely mother passed away
I miss her more than anyone will ever know
So many precious memories
Shared which will remain in my heart forever

Yet her presence is always with me
Objects she treasured I just adore
Useless items to some, but to me they’re priceless

Many things were left 
Unsaid but one thing is for sure
Mum I love you and think of you each day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/13/2024 5:58:00 PM
<3
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Date: 11/18/2023 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful poem Jan. Hugs to you. She must have been a wonderful blessing, you have honored her well with your poem. <3
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Date: 11/16/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you for this lovable poem.
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Date: 11/16/2023 6:39:00 PM
This is lovely, Jan. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs Charlie x
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Date: 11/16/2023 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. A lovely Acrostic write/tribute. I am so very sorry. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:40:00 PM
My condolence. Wonderful tribute to your mom. It was a treasure to have a mom like yours. Congratulations on your win. Many hugs and blessings my friend.
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:21:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful tribute poem to your Mom, hugs.
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Date: 11/15/2023 1:34:00 PM
You are an amazing and loyal daughter . Here I am way far away from my mother and I only call her a few times a month, and I can think of none of her possessions I would care to have when she passes away. Of course, I love her a lot, but she and I are opposites in many ways, and she was quite the eccentric as I was growing up. I sure wish I had more time to spend with her like you did with your dear mom
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Date: 11/14/2023 12:31:00 PM
A touching tribute, Jan. I miss mine too!
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:31:00 PM
aww thanks DT, sending hugs I am so glad you are back:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2023 10:20:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to your mom. I am so grateful to have mine and she truly is a beautiful person. love phyl
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:30:00 PM
you are so lucky Phyllis! hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2023 2:52:00 AM
- The miss is deep ... but, you are in her heart, Jan :) - A sensitive write ... lovely :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:30:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise, will be a year this month, I can believe how time has flown:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2023 7:01:00 PM
Great touching poem, Jan. Mother is the most precious gift of God one gets.
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:30:00 PM
thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2023 6:35:00 PM
I understand… I have two pairs of Autumn socks - I still can’t put on, a figurine wedding shoe on my dresser. My dad still holds on to all else. That is ok. Sometimes when I am cleaning I walk into her closet and touch the sweater I Last pulled for her to wear. My heart touches yours, Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:29:00 PM
I have several jumpers I wear, i feel like its a hug from heaven:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2023 4:14:00 PM
Lovely Acrostic tribute to a fine mother, Jan. I'm sure she smiling as she reads your poem about her. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx
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