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Mother, Magical Moment words Contest Sponsored by Constance la France 11/13/23

It is almost a year since My lovely mother passed away I miss her more than anyone will ever know So many precious memories Shared which will remain in my heart forever Yet her presence is always with me Objects she treasured I just adore Useless items to some, but to me they’re priceless Many things were left Unsaid but one thing is for sure Mum I love you and think of you each day

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Date: 1/13/2024 5:58:00 PM
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Date: 11/18/2023 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful poem Jan. Hugs to you. She must have been a wonderful blessing, you have honored her well with your poem. <3
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Date: 11/16/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you for this lovable poem.
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Date: 11/16/2023 6:39:00 PM
This is lovely, Jan. Congratulations on your top win! Hugs Charlie x
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Date: 11/16/2023 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. A lovely Acrostic write/tribute. I am so very sorry. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:40:00 PM
My condolence. Wonderful tribute to your mom. It was a treasure to have a mom like yours. Congratulations on your win. Many hugs and blessings my friend.
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:21:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful tribute poem to your Mom, hugs.
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Date: 11/15/2023 1:34:00 PM
You are an amazing and loyal daughter . Here I am way far away from my mother and I only call her a few times a month, and I can think of none of her possessions I would care to have when she passes away. Of course, I love her a lot, but she and I are opposites in many ways, and she was quite the eccentric as I was growing up. I sure wish I had more time to spend with her like you did with your dear mom
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Date: 11/14/2023 12:31:00 PM
A touching tribute, Jan. I miss mine too!
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:31:00 PM
aww thanks DT, sending hugs I am so glad you are back:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2023 10:20:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to your mom. I am so grateful to have mine and she truly is a beautiful person. love phyl
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:30:00 PM
you are so lucky Phyllis! hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2023 2:52:00 AM
- The miss is deep ... but, you are in her heart, Jan :) - A sensitive write ... lovely :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:30:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise, will be a year this month, I can believe how time has flown:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2023 7:01:00 PM
Great touching poem, Jan. Mother is the most precious gift of God one gets.
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:30:00 PM
thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2023 6:35:00 PM
I understand… I have two pairs of Autumn socks - I still can’t put on, a figurine wedding shoe on my dresser. My dad still holds on to all else. That is ok. Sometimes when I am cleaning I walk into her closet and touch the sweater I Last pulled for her to wear. My heart touches yours, Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:29:00 PM
I have several jumpers I wear, i feel like its a hug from heaven:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/13/2023 4:14:00 PM
Lovely Acrostic tribute to a fine mother, Jan. I'm sure she smiling as she reads your poem about her. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/13/2023 3:09:00 PM
a nicely written Acrostic, Jan. I love 'so many memories'...that's the way I feel about my mom and regret some of the things unsaid...yet my love for her prevails long after her passing. I sincerely liked what you did here. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:17:00 PM
Thanks sara, her birthday would have been 2nd Nov the same as my hubby and she passed away on son's birthday so she will always be in our thoughts. hugs Jan xx

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