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You've remained a particularly fantastic mother to me. Adequately training, I wouldn't have gotten gloomy As follows, I'm keeping in touch with you today. I humbly beg that God would lavishly meed you all the way. Throughout the long term, I've seen delight and sorrow. You were the main one to watch him grow. Also, presently I'm a man you've raised. Be that as it may, more often than not, you liaised. My mother led me to His Way, and I am proud. Without your help, I'd be lost in the crowd. But you lead me to this point in my life.  Can seek boldness after strife. The capacity to withstand any close-to-home attack. That my enemies toss at me, and I may lack. Thus it is with you, 'the world's best mother.' I'll never forget you when you detonate your bawler. Mother Mother, I'm intrigued about your wonder. Either a woman or a divinely sent savior. Her emotions run in her as deep as a river. A smooth and calm lady is my mother.
Written: September 16, 2021 ''M'' Contest, New Poems Only - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/22/2021 2:32:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Lasaad Tayeb
Date: 9/22/2021 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. I appreciate your reading commenting, and placing my poem. I'm honored by this placement. Blessings and warm hugs
Date: 9/20/2021 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful "Mother" write and picture. Love It. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 9/20/2021 12:45:00 AM
Very beautiful writing on Mother. Indeed, full of poesy. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/19/2021 10:52:00 AM
That is a cute poem. I loved the line about "bawler" So original, Lasaad. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:34:00 AM
This is very poetic, each line so vivid in inageryamd with great flow throughout..
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Date: 9/17/2021 6:09:00 AM
A hymn to Mother! Outstanding tribute, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings!
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Date: 9/17/2021 6:03:00 AM
Heartfelt tribute to your mother, Lasaad. All the best.
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Date: 9/17/2021 3:47:00 AM
Mothers have such a responsibility in raising their children. Nice tribute to motherhood...Delice
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Date: 9/17/2021 1:39:00 AM
Fantastic poem and a great tribute to a mother, Best for a win,
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Date: 9/16/2021 6:56:00 PM
What a beautiful poem in tribute to your mother Lasaad, a joy to read… Belle
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