Mother

Mother
Revered, hallowed
No pulse throbbing
My everlasting need and longing
Precious.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bangalee Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 10:32 PM
Beautiful cinquain of the topics of mother
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Thank you so much, Mahtab, for the pleasure of reading my humble words and beautifully appreciating! My deepest regards and blessings.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Hi Besma, I love this emotive, loving piece reflecting the beauty and virtues of a mother! So captivating with a few words! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Warm and genuine is your feedback! I highly value and appreciate your gracious visit! Thank you so much Pandita.
One Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:01 PM
Beautiful tribute to mothers..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Thank you so much Silent One for bestowing me your precious time to read and appreciate my write.
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:48 PM
- How beautiful to your mother, Besma :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Thank you so much dear Anne-Lise for your precious comment! My pleasure.
Pandit Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 6:09 AM
A precious poem.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 6:18 AM
My pleasure! So much elated and honoured! Thank you so much.
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