Mother

Mother
Revered, hallowed
No pulse throbbing
My everlasting need and longing
Precious.

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Pandita Sanchez

Date: 4/29/2018 8:36:00 AM

Hi Besma, I love this emotive, loving piece reflecting the beauty and virtues of a mother! So captivating with a few words! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/29/2018 10:48:00 AM

Warm and genuine is your feedback! I highly value and appreciate your gracious visit! Thank you so much Pandita.

Silent One

Date: 4/25/2018 5:01:00 PM

Beautiful tribute to mothers..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2018 5:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Silent One for bestowing me your precious time to read and appreciate my write.

Sunshine Smile

Date: 4/23/2018 2:48:00 PM

- How beautiful to your mother, Besma :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/23/2018 3:10:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Anne-Lise for your precious comment! My pleasure.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/23/2018 6:09:00 AM

A precious poem.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/23/2018 6:18:00 AM

My pleasure! So much elated and honoured! Thank you so much.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/23/2018 3:49:00 AM

Lovely cinquain, a tribute to your mother.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/23/2018 4:49:00 AM

I appreciate your visit and your lovely feedback. Thank you so much.