Mother

Mother Mother i feel so down Its strange not having you around I blame you its all your fault iv started the Gin as iv ran out of malt My clothes are dirty there are holes in my shorts miss you like crazy always in my thoughts

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Arturo Michael

Date: 3/14/2018 6:34:00 AM

This reads real...I like it...All the best

Lisa Costigan
Date: 3/14/2018 12:31:00 PM

Thank you

Silent One

Date: 3/13/2018 2:44:00 PM

I would be lost with my mother.. This is really sad, I hope you feel better.. Your mum would have wanted you to be happy and to smile...

Lisa Costigan
Date: 3/14/2018 12:31:00 PM

Its no where near my life and thoughts i have for my Mam...I wrote this for a comp i took part in..but thank you for reading and comments

Lisa Costigan

Date: 3/13/2018 10:48:00 AM

I wrote this to take part in the poetry contest.