Mother

Mother Mother i feel so down
Its strange not having you around
I blame you its all your fault iv started the Gin 
as iv ran out of malt
My clothes are dirty there are holes in my shorts
miss you like crazy always in my thoughts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michael Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 6:34 AM
This reads real...I like it...All the best
Costigan Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Thank you
One Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 2:44 PM
I would be lost with my mother.. This is really sad, I hope you feel better.. Your mum would have wanted you to be happy and to smile...
Costigan Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Its no where near my life and thoughts i have for my Mam...I wrote this for a comp i took part in..but thank you for reading and comments
Costigan Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:48 AM
I wrote this to take part in the poetry contest.
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