Moth

A glimpse, a flash of red.
Strands that catch the light.
Smoldering, enticing -
A moth doomed to ignite.
And suddenly he's back -
Familiar twist and knot.
A touch, a whispered word,
The scent of bergamot.
And from the tainted ashes,
Faint, persistent glow.
She's just another face,
Someone he used to know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arnone Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Wanted more Moth, and learned a new orange word! Very nice.... ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 12:17 AM
dang, girl, I am just clicking in circles!! this was a great one I "landed" on though I had seen it before.
Hunter Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 10:19 AM
Boo that dude! The way you used a moth in this one is sooo cool... it can't help being drawn by the light til' it gets burned...great metaphor...but I wonder if moths learn from their mistakes?hehe...I know I don't.
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:49 PM
wowowow, what imagery!!! love this one.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Why are women attracted to the wrong guys??? I really enjoyed your poem. I hope you have not been burnt.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful written Heather (we fight for true love) - oxox love Anne-Lise
Ober Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise :)
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