Moth

Up like a crucifix,
   Where do you go,
Tell me this,
    When u leave us 
below?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 24, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Clifton, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 3, 2016 at 10:55 PM
CLIFTON, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Interesting poem with great thoughts. Keep writing. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 4:27 PM
I enjoyed your Haiku. Sara
Taylor Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 7:56 AM
I like this piece a lot..good work
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 6:53 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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