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Most Beautiful Love

MOST BEAUTIFUL LOVE Barren rice fields, hungry heart; heels cracking dry ¬ thirsty soul part. Face awaiting, every season, knotted aching old ~ new reasons... Love! Oh Love! Written by God, crawl on us strengthen our grit. Clanging cymbals, sounding gongs; monotone symbols, forgotten songs. Magnetic face, probing the depths, soft gem breadth glorious grace. Love, darling, you make me sing, awaking warm jolly spring! Painter's brush ~ poetess deep crush; sight to blind ¬ mind to share... care? I'll try to hop, heights of the hills, conquering fears as melting chill... Nights are sunny, its love my sweet, 'cause of you always anew! Diamonds flair, light on wrong; purity fair err, patience miles long. old gnarled skin, weakening bones, brittle gray hair failing youthful tone. . . Dear honey, you did atone, staying with me until the end. Cinderella shoe¬ oceanic blue; dreams do come true, I love you. Ice and fire, heaven and hell, collapsing match try to fight well... Baby love, innocence smell, must I hasten or calmly hold? (c) Olive Eloisa 4:04pm July 08, 2014 CONTEST NAME: THE MOST BEAUTIFUL SPONSOR: DEBBIE GUZZI 4th place, to God be the greatest glory..:) Inspired by the Biblical Verse: I Corinthians 13

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/13/2014 10:09:00 PM

Love and Beauty, a very captivating poem!!! I loved this one. However, 4.04pm? I was sure it was 4.03pm!!!! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 9:59:00 AM

lool of course :D!! thanks much buddy Arthur.. God bless you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2014 12:30:00 AM

hey hey hey. BIG congrats. I was so happy to get on this list too~~ Luv ya!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/13/2014 8:30:00 PM

love you too Andrea.. :D thanks very much :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/12/2014 4:11:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi! This is such a beautiful poem! You talk of love (personal and in general) with ease and sincerity. You make love sound lovely and clean. Glad you learn new forms and carry on making use of them, thus perfecting them in the process. This is a worthy winner...congratulations!:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 9:07:00 PM

hahaha i like the one in apron :D weee it is so homey and so soft :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/12/2014 6:57:00 PM

Café latte coming...let me put my apron on....:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:58:00 PM

Hahaha yes Paul..:) I'm trying to apply what I'm learning..:) from time to time;) thanks for encouraging me and your an inspiration to me and all others..:) hey!! Coffee latte..:)!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/11/2014 6:18:00 PM

Great poem Olive; Love is what moves the world. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:56:00 PM

Unsweetened Lucy thank you for the drop by..:) hugs much.. I agree with you..:)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/11/2014 2:07:00 PM

Olive, this is a beauty. Stunning. Congratulations again, my dear.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:55:00 PM

thank you Faye..:) GBU

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/11/2014 11:35:00 AM

So happy to see this on the winners list!! Congrats! Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Arlene..:) hugs :)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/11/2014 5:28:00 AM

Beautifully written Olive. Congratulations on your high marks in the contest... Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:48:00 PM

Thank you Verlena..:) I'm glad you like it. GBU

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/11/2014 4:17:00 AM

N back again wid big congrats dear Olive! God bless u!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:48:00 PM

thanks Dr. Upma glad for your visit..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2014 12:30:00 AM

A great poem on love, Sweet Olive. You could not have chosen a better topic. I am really enjoying writng more sijo now too!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:46:00 PM

Thanks Andrea..:) I'm glad you like it..:) and I as well do too..:) thanks to Nette and Debbie..:)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/10/2014 7:00:00 AM

Love conquers all!!.. Outstanding, Olive.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:45:00 PM

Thanks much Arlene..:) your poems are outstanding too..:) GBU and hugs..:)

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 5:52:00 PM

Sounds like going through all the rocks and roads of life with a love that embraces all. Beautiful Olive your words are always well said :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 3:57:00 AM

Thank you Casarah..:)

David Williams

Date: 7/9/2014 5:04:00 PM

Olive this is an excellent write...David

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2014 4:04:00 PM

Thank you David.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2014 8:10:00 AM

- Impressive dear Olive !!!!!! - A fantastic well written poem! - I agree : "LOVE ..... wonderful and beautiful experience one can ever have"!! - Have a nice day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2014 3:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne Lise.. :)! I appreciate your visits.. :D hugs and hugs.. you have been my constant inspiration here since I started here.. :)

Ct Duet

Date: 7/8/2014 3:32:00 PM

wonderful Olive...hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2014 3:25:00 PM

thank you :D Casarah or Tim.. :D?! hugs too

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2014 2:34:00 PM

eloi,my a lilting piece.. let me share my prof-comments via soupie, hehe!.. huggs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thank you Nette... :) yes will go home soon :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/8/2014 9:20:00 AM

Hi little sweetie, glad I came here to read this, it did not come through this way onto the contest page [cut our ill guts - what do you mean hon guts is an ugly word - rethink this phrase]- gongs, songs- face grace, sing, spring- line 4, 5, 6 IS internal rhyme ;) I see you have joy in your rhyming but do remember not to over use the technique & slant or half rhyme is much more interesting Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/8/2014 10:26:00 AM

thank you Debbie.. :O I'll take this to mind... and will review again the internal rhymes.. thank you.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 8:51:00 AM

Awesome sijos on love my dear Olive ! Lovely n most beautiful !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 4:19:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Upma.:) love your visits..:)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:30:00 AM

This is so awesome Olive :) I love it:) hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/9/2014 8:29:00 PM

thank you so much Tim.. :) im sorry took long replying.. been busy.. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/8/2014 8:18:00 AM

:) I want to say that Love is one of the most delicate fruitful, wonderful and beautiful experience one can ever have.. :) My descriptions aren't enough of how magical and how touching is love when it knocks you right there and there.. :D well, noted though that it's TRUE LOVE from sincerest persons... i don't speak for just couples in love but to all.. :)