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Mossy Stones

Moss covered surface, Thrives on the moist forest floor; Garden of green stones.

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Date: 6/19/2009 3:46:00 PM

Nice use of green imagery to connect your thoughts in this one. Interesting perspective in the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Have a good weekend. Karen

Donna Golden

Date: 6/17/2009 12:04:00 PM

Lovely, Raul! I can see and smell the forest and feel the slippery stones as I carefully pass! Great haiku! Donna

James Fraser

Date: 6/11/2009 2:15:00 AM

Now this is a really awesome write Raul, running ones finger over the felt like moss is another of natures gems, brilliant Haiku>James

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/9/2009 9:51:00 PM

You have a gift for vividly painted haiku's, this is beautiful.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/9/2009 2:53:00 PM

Can picture it clearly and smell that earthy smell too. You are just so good at these! Love, Shar

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/9/2009 2:00:00 PM

impressionist! cool! Jim

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/9/2009 11:47:00 AM

Garden of green stones....love that Raul...your are the king my friend.....showing us nature from the core...thanks for the comments today.

Brandy Megens

Date: 6/9/2009 10:41:00 AM

i still see moss where i live mother nature at her best great imagery raul

Diane Christian

Date: 6/9/2009 10:40:00 AM

oh yes I remember the beauty of moss in the country side, mainly wen we went for a walk on the moors, and with heather also gives lots of colour, I like the purple, God bless you from diane

Brittany Martin

Date: 6/9/2009 10:30:00 AM

this paints a very pretty picture with such few words. nice job.

Alli B.

Date: 6/9/2009 10:27:00 AM

Raul, I really enjoyed this. So simple. Yet for me the simpler the better. Good write. With love, Alli