Mosquitoes

We're going to step outside
Where mosquitoes will surely bite
They really make you itch,
And with a lot of might,
They hold on really tight
It's hard to put them in sight
But if you slap
     and do it just right
You'll be free
     at least until tomorrow night




(with help from my three sons)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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August 2, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Well done, Sean.A nice, rhyming verse. I really enjoyed reading it. Perhaps will you be interested in my poem on the same motif, entitled "To the Mosquito"? Regards, Ram, R.V.
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