Mosquitoes

Mosquitoes
	

Hovering in the humid night
Singing an eerie chorus on my distraught ear
Hungry swords & Daggers poised


JM

17th Oct’ 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Too true! That"s how they really are; you couldn"t have described their stihg dance around the poor victim better than you did here, dear poet friend. You expressed my sufferings too! Clever write! May you recover from the poison! Blessings, Hanitra
Matose Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 6:46 AM
The District where I live is a mosquito zone. When summer is approaching, we begin to scratch before we're bitten and when we 're bitten on a finger, we bandage the whole body! WHEN SICK, MEDICATION YOU RECEIVE IS SO BITTER AND PAINFUL. WHEN YOU RECOVER, YOU'D HAVE SURVIVED BOTH DISEASE AND THE MEDICATION! Ha ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! Thank you so much! Friend, JM
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:58 AM
- Well done, Joseph .... (I do not count .... I "just" read :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Matose Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 5:20 AM
This one was a poem lacking life and blew breath into it.....you said that in your recent poem. Thanks for a quick comment. I adore you man. Yours JM
Matose Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 5:18 AM
You're right. I simply let this one go. Thanks Andresen. Friend JM
Mehta Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 2:56 AM
Unusual syllable count for a haiku, Joseph
Matose Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 5:22 AM
Dr. I attached a comment meant for you on Anne's. Thanks. JM
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