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Mosquitoes

Mosquitoes Hovering in the humid night Singing an eerie chorus on my distraught ear Hungry swords & Daggers poised JM 17th Oct’ 2013

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/19/2013 3:56:00 PM

Too true! That"s how they really are; you couldn"t have described their stihg dance around the poor victim better than you did here, dear poet friend. You expressed my sufferings too! Clever write! May you recover from the poison! Blessings, Hanitra

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/21/2013 6:46:00 AM

The District where I live is a mosquito zone. When summer is approaching, we begin to scratch before we're bitten and when we 're bitten on a finger, we bandage the whole body! WHEN SICK, MEDICATION YOU RECEIVE IS SO BITTER AND PAINFUL. WHEN YOU RECOVER, YOU'D HAVE SURVIVED BOTH DISEASE AND THE MEDICATION! Ha ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! Thank you so much! Friend, JM

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2013 4:58:00 AM

- Well done, Joseph .... (I do not count .... I "just" read :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/17/2013 5:20:00 AM

This one was a poem lacking life and blew breath into it.....you said that in your recent poem. Thanks for a quick comment. I adore you man. Yours JM

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/17/2013 5:18:00 AM

You're right. I simply let this one go. Thanks Andresen. Friend JM

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/17/2013 2:56:00 AM

Unusual syllable count for a haiku, Joseph

Joseph Matose
Date: 10/17/2013 5:22:00 AM

Dr. I attached a comment meant for you on Anne's. Thanks. JM